It looks good, a solid profile shot with some nice composition.
If she's looking for places to improve I'd punch the shadows a bit more, but then again it could just be the quality of the image. Really good though, thanks for sharing!
Thanks, she appreciates it. She's been doing a lot recently and when she showed me that I thought it was her best so far. Its not perfect but I still think its really good and has some great detail to it. Plus its my fav character :3