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WIP's

Postby Shizuo » Sun Aug 14, 2011 4:17 am

art i'm working on, i think my inking has gotten better.
i neglected my sketchbook last week, so i'm devoting my time to finishing these.
someone asked me about showing the process of my art...ummm, i"m sorry, i keep forgetting to takes pics when i sketch my art. I'll make sure to do it next time!
for now, this is the inking before i colour it. yar.
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Re: WIP's

Postby Tomoki » Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:20 pm

I just glanced over them but the only noticable issue I found was the head in the second pic, the one with the hat. It seems a bit small, might be just me though. I would suggest scanning them if you can, or getting the whole page in one shot, its kind of hard to make out the details.
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Re: WIP's

Postby plixik » Tue Aug 16, 2011 4:50 pm

I second everything Tomoki said. Your inking is looking pretty good; you have some nice line weight variation. As I said before though, you need some perspective on your ears. An ear in the front view shouldn't look like an ear from the side view.
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Re: WIP's

Postby dino-anima-sorus » Thu Aug 09, 2012 12:10 pm

I love the Tones you give it, just gives it that extra awsome, but I do agree about the seconds one hat 8-)
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Re: WIP's

Postby FLAMEnekoNEDM » Sat Aug 11, 2012 5:34 am

thumbs up bro better than what i can do...atm....
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